Exodus….
I wish I could vanish,
But in vain I wail
There are tough times ahead..
I wish I could sail…
I shed some tears , but there’s no one to hear,
I’m burnt to ashes and more whiplashes
I gather myself , all over again
To stand above and fight the pain.
Walking through woods and waddling through ponds..
I saw vixens and vultures all around
Their fathom green eyes…
Send a shiver down my spine.
Miles of land and the mountains so grand…
I try to stand but they tumble like dunes of sand
The mystic river, enraptures my soul
I want to conquer but I lose control
A mélange of emotions, deluge my head
Of incessant grief, they’ve all bred
I walk through lanes , I walk on sand
Don’t know where to go, I don’t know where Il land
Time flies by, like a candle it melts
Leaves behind traces and you cannot forget
A strong wind blows…. My guiding light goes
Its dark again and I’m stranded in the rain
I hit an adobe and tumble on the ground
With no one to talk and nobody around
I exult in pain, I had wished I could fly
Moving into oblivion I bid goodbye…….
Saturday, March 10, 2007
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8 comments:
practical n philosphical.
did transcend my thoughts at d end
(i will never bid googdbye) coz i aint gonna fail.
but its a commendable start. carry on.
its not that i dont suffer.
its that i kno the unimportance of suffering,
i know that pain is to be fought and thrown aside,
not to be accepted as part of one's soul and as a permanent scar across one's view of existence.
dont feel sorry for me.
it was gone right then.
hmmm....awesome...keep going...
actually i cud relate it to my present..
but wonderful yaar..:)
words that speak . Excellent work
hey.. nice buddy..
Miles of land and the mountains so grand…
I try to stand but they tumble like dunes of sand
The mystic river, enraptures my soul
I want to conquer but I lose control
...real good words
q gud quote gets a bad comment... but am not gettin those BAD words..... but dont thinks its gud...
remarkable blog...
carry on.....
u will b d next KIRAN DESAI..... for sure...
tc always
earlier 1 has a mistake...
gud quote gets a bad comment... but am not gettin those BAD words..... but dont thinks its not gud...
remarkable blog...
carry on.....
u will b d next KIRAN DESAI..... for sure...
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